NicStar21100

Possibly interesting release for readers of The Entity or just fans of great Tawog art in general. My good friend and fellow fanfic writer Liz! (better known on Wattpad as gaywriterthings) made me an amazing birthday present a few days ago, which included drawings for every chapter of The Entity so far.
          	
          	I already edited them in on the chapter pages, but also made a little video, which fits well as a visual recap for the story so far, now that I'm about halfway through writing it. I'd recommend checking it out and it also has a link for commissions if you want Liz! to draw something for you too. Dw, unlike the scammers you always see in the comments here, they are the real deal: https://youtu.be/t_eyALBtqbg?si=lq8NfAMx7aRLy5wA

UltimateGoomba

@NicStar21100 I'm gonna check it out right now!
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NicStar21100

Possibly interesting release for readers of The Entity or just fans of great Tawog art in general. My good friend and fellow fanfic writer Liz! (better known on Wattpad as gaywriterthings) made me an amazing birthday present a few days ago, which included drawings for every chapter of The Entity so far.
          
          I already edited them in on the chapter pages, but also made a little video, which fits well as a visual recap for the story so far, now that I'm about halfway through writing it. I'd recommend checking it out and it also has a link for commissions if you want Liz! to draw something for you too. Dw, unlike the scammers you always see in the comments here, they are the real deal: https://youtu.be/t_eyALBtqbg?si=lq8NfAMx7aRLy5wA

UltimateGoomba

@NicStar21100 I'm gonna check it out right now!
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NicStar21100

Did a rewrite fic for The Amadain, an episode the execution of which I didn't like a whole lot for reasons I mention at the beginning of it so I changed things up a bit.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406469171-the-amadain-rewritten-episode

NicStar21100

@Nboy2005 Agreed, those all weren't great either
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Nboy2005

@NicStar21100 Ok, I suppose that would be a good episode to rewrite or if you want some suggestions, The Rival, The Bros or The Meddler could be some food for thought.
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NicStar21100

@Nboy2005 Probably won't rewrite another episode in a while as I still have too many other stories I want to do but if I had to choose one, I hated The Trumpet the most out of the new ones and thought it could've been a lot better so I'd say that one
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Nboy2005

“Misunderstood” 
          
          Have you read this Gumball fanfic? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13890307/1/Misunderstood 
          
          Basically what happens is that Gumball leaves Elmore after being framed for destroying the school. And this fractures the family as Nicole disowns him for doing something so monumentally idiotic. 
          
          The fic was unfinished, but if you had the chance to finish it, what would you change? Is it any good?

NicStar21100

@Nboy2005 Would've left it like the original ended since I thought it was good that way. Nothing implied that he would stay out of Elmore for the rest of his life and he'd stay in touch with his family and keep visiting.
            
            If anything, the characters of Penny and Nicole were the bad part in it since the former breaks up with him immediately to go to Tobias and the latter just let the police take him instead of defending him which is completely unlike them.
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Nboy2005

Well, if you were to finish the version that is still available, how would you make it end? Would you have Gumball return to Elmore and reunite with the rest of the family, or have him stay out of Elmore for the rest of his life and forget about his family and friends? 
            
            The former would probably the more sensible choice as the latter sounds like a complete and utter assassination of Gumball’s character.
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NicStar21100

@Nboy2005 It was also on fanfic.net but didn't exist anymore there last time I checked
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NicStar21100

Slightly remastered my Tawog Christmas fanfic from last year, based on the plot of "It's a Wonderful Life". Not too much has changed if you already know the story, mostly a few added dialogues and one or two extra scenes.
          
          Nevertheless, I thought those helped to not make the story seem as rushed anymore as it was when I wrote it last Christmas.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387041046-the-wonderful-life-of-gumball

Nboy2005

@NicStar21100  Have you read this Gumball fanfic? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13890307/1/Misunderstood
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OneFicWonder

@NicStar21100 Oooo interesting! I loved that fic when I read it for the first time. I think I'll add some comments on it now that you've reminded me of it
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Bolt382872

Hi, I wanted to leave you this message under your comment on the new chapter, but since you haven't left any (I don't know if you still have to leave them... sorry if I'm a little hasty), I wanted to leave it here. Thanks for the rating on the chapter! It's nice to see that I haven't been forgotten after being gone for a while :)

NicStar21100

@Bolt382872 No worries. Sorry, I didn't leave any this time because I was a bit in a hurry and read through the chapter pretty quickly, also with it being quite long, but I enjoyed it a lot! Possibly even my favorite one of the story so far
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