NickolegKeiige

Salutation, all of you beautiful biomasses. Here's a question. I have an idea of incorporating every now and then an in-between semi chapter explaining the concepts, technology, world building and settings in the story. Similar to how the Attack on Titans anime pause every so often to give explanation to its world building. 
          	
          	This story rely on semi realistic, plausible hard-scifi tech and semi hard logical magic system. Thus I have a lot of explanation to do whenever I introduce something new. So I think it's more convenient to have a dedicated chapter explaining stuff to readers so as to clear confusion.
          	
          	Either that or I can just incorporate the explanation of various  things into character's dialogues. The dialogues will have to be longer, more exposition based and less immersive, but it is what it is.
          	
          	What do you think about such idea? Let me know. Also, do you want me to continue Athena's current operation? Or go back to the Spec ops 's shenanigans?

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@NickolegKeiige maybe Spec ops
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NickolegKeiige

Salutation, all of you beautiful biomasses. Here's a question. I have an idea of incorporating every now and then an in-between semi chapter explaining the concepts, technology, world building and settings in the story. Similar to how the Attack on Titans anime pause every so often to give explanation to its world building. 
          
          This story rely on semi realistic, plausible hard-scifi tech and semi hard logical magic system. Thus I have a lot of explanation to do whenever I introduce something new. So I think it's more convenient to have a dedicated chapter explaining stuff to readers so as to clear confusion.
          
          Either that or I can just incorporate the explanation of various  things into character's dialogues. The dialogues will have to be longer, more exposition based and less immersive, but it is what it is.
          
          What do you think about such idea? Let me know. Also, do you want me to continue Athena's current operation? Or go back to the Spec ops 's shenanigans?

nnksnjcnjsnc

@NickolegKeiige maybe Spec ops
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KevinMcKinney

I am currently reading Contact Alpha but have reached a point where the grammatical errors are detracting from the story to me. Please stude how on the English language the letters "ed" at the end of a word indicate a specific action
          Just like I indicate to you this is a problem! (PROPER! I "indicated" to you this is a problem. For a teen reader nowadays it won't be noticeable but io an adult like me it makes me cringe to read! Good story base so far and I wish you good luck in your future writings. (I'll watch for an "Updated/edited version notice in the future so I might come back and read it!)

KevinMcKinney

@KevinMcKinney YES! It usually Is an "Adult" that is a publisher or in a position of power to forward and/or enhance someone's writing career! (If they wish?) No longer see anything here and this was the last check that I'm going to make.
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Kaibrrrrrrr

@KevinMcKinney *to an adult
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NickolegKeiige

Greetings. I have a question for all of you. Which art style should I stick to? Anime style? Realistic style? Or both but leaning a bit to anime style? I personally like the idea of not too overly anime moe but just enough anime style. Please give your opinions.

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@NickolegKeiige I believe is mixture of Both is definitely make so Great Anime Style
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The_Typical_Weed

@NickolegKeiige A Mixture of Both does seems nice
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_Capztats

@NickolegKeiige Well for me, be more on realistic style rather than anime style, because it gives more "REALISM" to it. ;))
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skyfleet12z

Greetings O great-and-powerful NickolegKeiige for I am but a lower life than U. And if this body of flesh and bones be so bold to ask for thy precious time, be that thee NickolegKeiige not bother with the contents of my work. For I am no more than a human. It is here below and lower (not that you'll find it) to thee NickolegKeiige.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
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