NickolegKeiige

Salutation, all of you beautiful biomasses. Here's a question. I have an idea of incorporating every now and then an in-between semi chapter explaining the concepts, technology, world building and settings in the story. Similar to how the Attack on Titans anime pause every so often to give explanation to its world building. 
          	
          	This story rely on semi realistic, plausible hard-scifi tech and semi hard logical magic system. Thus I have a lot of explanation to do whenever I introduce something new. So I think it's more convenient to have a dedicated chapter explaining stuff to readers so as to clear confusion.
          	
          	Either that or I can just incorporate the explanation of various  things into character's dialogues. The dialogues will have to be longer, more exposition based and less immersive, but it is what it is.
          	
          	What do you think about such idea? Let me know. Also, do you want me to continue Athena's current operation? Or go back to the Spec ops 's shenanigans?

NickolegKeiige

Salutation, all of you beautiful biomasses. Here's a question. I have an idea of incorporating every now and then an in-between semi chapter explaining the concepts, technology, world building and settings in the story. Similar to how the Attack on Titans anime pause every so often to give explanation to its world building. 
          
          This story rely on semi realistic, plausible hard-scifi tech and semi hard logical magic system. Thus I have a lot of explanation to do whenever I introduce something new. So I think it's more convenient to have a dedicated chapter explaining stuff to readers so as to clear confusion.
          
          Either that or I can just incorporate the explanation of various  things into character's dialogues. The dialogues will have to be longer, more exposition based and less immersive, but it is what it is.
          
          What do you think about such idea? Let me know. Also, do you want me to continue Athena's current operation? Or go back to the Spec ops 's shenanigans?

KevinMcKinney

I am currently reading Contact Alpha but have reached a point where the grammatical errors are detracting from the story to me. Please stude how on the English language the letters "ed" at the end of a word indicate a specific action
          Just like I indicate to you this is a problem! (PROPER! I "indicated" to you this is a problem. For a teen reader nowadays it won't be noticeable but io an adult like me it makes me cringe to read! Good story base so far and I wish you good luck in your future writings. (I'll watch for an "Updated/edited version notice in the future so I might come back and read it!)

KevinMcKinney

@KevinMcKinney YES! It usually Is an "Adult" that is a publisher or in a position of power to forward and/or enhance someone's writing career! (If they wish?) No longer see anything here and this was the last check that I'm going to make.
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NickolegKeiige

Greetings. I have a question for all of you. Which art style should I stick to? Anime style? Realistic style? Or both but leaning a bit to anime style? I personally like the idea of not too overly anime moe but just enough anime style. Please give your opinions.

zilhaziq

@NickolegKeiige I believe is mixture of Both is definitely make so Great Anime Style
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The_Typical_Weed

@NickolegKeiige A Mixture of Both does seems nice
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_Capztats

@NickolegKeiige Well for me, be more on realistic style rather than anime style, because it gives more "REALISM" to it. ;))
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skyfleet12z

Greetings O great-and-powerful NickolegKeiige for I am but a lower life than U. And if this body of flesh and bones be so bold to ask for thy precious time, be that thee NickolegKeiige not bother with the contents of my work. For I am no more than a human. It is here below and lower (not that you'll find it) to thee NickolegKeiige.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
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NickolegKeiige

Greetings all of you beautiful containers of biomass and biological flesh. I am back from a big break...Well mostly procrastinating but I am now back. Sorry for the long silence.
          
          Chapter 15 is coming soon, detailing the happening of Operation Plunder (Name might be changed soon). Also I am tempted to change the mega corporation name in the 2nd skit to Stellaris corporation but seeing that it has its dirty and slimy hands in almost al aspects of society, from the fusion reactors that power FTL drives to the pre-made pizzas sold within supermarkets in your local spinstation district, I recon Eureka seems more "open" than Stellaris which implies that it only focuses into space stuff. Let me know.
          
          It will play a rather important part in the story overall, being both the protagonist and antagonist, kinda.
          
          I am also working on drawing Director, the founder and CEO of Eureka.
          
          Expect the next chapter to be coming out in the next few days to the next week.
          
          That is all. Now go back to continuing whatever you biological creatures do and have a nice day.

AC-130_hydra_slayer

@NickolegKeiige Human nation at it's finest.
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NickolegKeiige

I have been following the whole AI industry for a while now. And it is scary, very scary. 
          If you watched Linus Tech Tips podcast with a guy (forgot his name), they talked about what the new gpt- 4 model can do, about the new Microsoft Office copilot AI. You have people making US president AI voice playing DnD table top. You have people making songs with different artists and singers fake AI voice covers. You have text generation, image generation. What’s next? Video generation? I mean we already have deep fake. In fact a few news outlets use deep fake for news reporting and most viewers are none the wiser!
          I might include the use of these AI in this story. Like making false flags, making false recordings of voices or videos to manipulate the kingdoms and nations around. And with the new GPT model coming out with its capability, as long as you have a pc installed in your brain and have connection to the main server, anyone could be a wise sage!
          Young governor Kansa already have A-LAN installed in his mind so this works out.
          I would have never thought that Skynet would be coming so soon, damn. We are at the cusp of the dawn of the era of AI my fellow organic beings. The last 20-30 years were the era of the internet. Let’s just hope we don’t go the Skynet way, or any other way where AI takes over. Oh and space too with all the second space race burning hotter the Hindenburg zeppelin but I’m mainly concerned about the AI thing.
          Also how do post pictures here?

NickolegKeiige

@Estefanescreve have you seen some of the later AI models? They have fixed the hands and many other easily recognizable mistakes AI makes. Even Linus Tech Tips freaks out about this. The ways of which we used to rely upon to spot AI stuff is being diminished, very quickly.
            And AI at the years of the story, which is the 24th century would have been so advanced its might ass well be sentient general intelligence. And obviously there are billions of ways to by pass copyright laws. Those weaknesses and many other would have been fixed long before the current story timeline.
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Estefanescreve

@NickolegKeiige ngl, thats scary and stupid. Everyone can just search up the answer in their brain while in an exam, let an AI create videos and more. Fortunately there are some 'weaknesses' such as:
            
            Their problems in drawing a hand
            Countermeasures to combat plagerism
            and others
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Thenewbl

@ NickolegKeiige  you can't post pictures you can put links or create a wattpad story and put some images in there
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