Nico_diAngelo_islife

because I just wanted to torture myself I decided to start rewriting the absolute monstrosity that is the fanfic i wrote way back during COVID times... I've fixed the first five chapters to the best of my ability. I looked at the 6th chapter and immediately slammed my computer shut. I don't think that I'm brave enough to even start fixing that one yet. how the hell do I get myself roped into these messes? It is the worst scene i think I've ever written and there is absolutely no  chemistry between the two characters, no decent plot layed out, and no slow burning. I live for slow burns now. I have decided that I must turn this fanfic into a slow burn if it's the last thing I do. I still hate this fanfic with every fiber of my being, but because over 15k people have read it I've decided I can't let it stay the terrible monstrosity that it is. So the choices were delete it, or make it better, I chose to try to make it better.

Nico_diAngelo_islife

update, i got through 10 chapters before giving up and yes, I've given up, the first 10 chapters still suck, just slightly less than before. Anything after chapter 10 will probably make you need therapy because of how terrible it is
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ZahraShahbazian

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Nico_diAngelo_islife

@ZahraShahbazian i'll look into it when I get a chance, thanks for the recommendation
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Nico_diAngelo_islife

because I just wanted to torture myself I decided to start rewriting the absolute monstrosity that is the fanfic i wrote way back during COVID times... I've fixed the first five chapters to the best of my ability. I looked at the 6th chapter and immediately slammed my computer shut. I don't think that I'm brave enough to even start fixing that one yet. how the hell do I get myself roped into these messes? It is the worst scene i think I've ever written and there is absolutely no  chemistry between the two characters, no decent plot layed out, and no slow burning. I live for slow burns now. I have decided that I must turn this fanfic into a slow burn if it's the last thing I do. I still hate this fanfic with every fiber of my being, but because over 15k people have read it I've decided I can't let it stay the terrible monstrosity that it is. So the choices were delete it, or make it better, I chose to try to make it better.

Nico_diAngelo_islife

update, i got through 10 chapters before giving up and yes, I've given up, the first 10 chapters still suck, just slightly less than before. Anything after chapter 10 will probably make you need therapy because of how terrible it is
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Nico_diAngelo_islife

Hello to anyone who bothers to read these! I am back! I've been working around with editing the chapters I have published on STWNMTB but I'm also toying around with re-naming it to The Dark War bc the current title is super long, what are we thinking? feeling? questions? comments? concerns? To the 336 people who have read my story so far, shoutout to you, you're amazing for supporting a small author who's hope is to one day turn this into a published story, and to anyone who may be interested, please check it out, it would mean a lot to me!

Nico_diAngelo_islife

Well I'm sorry to bother you again but by now you must know  what this means.... 
          
          I'm taking a break because of my writers block :( sorry no new chapter
          
          
          
          I totally got you guys! 
          Chapter 10 is now out but yes I will be takin longer for new updates because I currently have no ideas