The huntress

Hey author, I really don't know if you ever get the chance to read this but the story you wrote started off good outside of the few grammatical errors. Then it started to go in a different direction. And at the it was not what I hoped for. The ending is not good and very confusing. It seems you ran out of steam and just wrote something and left it like that. Now I don't know if you plan on making a book 2 for this story but if you do I hope you can find a way to make of the last chapter. Until then thank you for the story you wrote.

You should do a re-write cause the story goes hay wire

After Jason marks her the story goes upside down.??? And cliff hanger ending
          

Love the book. Is it going to be a part 2 to it. 

Loved, your book, but what happened after Jason marked her??? It, really doesn't make any sense!!!!!

thanks for voting love, have a nice day! :)

To all those who follow me my book is being edited and changed. I have changed the last chapter. More chapter will be posted as it isn't finished yet. Enjoy reading!

@adeleroeder okay thanks a lot.

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