NicoleRomero010

Hello, Nico here! 
          	I've really revamped my previous story Sunny, Bright, Winter, Night, and if you were interested in that story, I hope you'll be even more impressed by the redone  version: Sunny/Bright/Winter/Night. Unfortunately I was having a lot of trouble with plot with the previous version of the story, so I completely scrapped that story and began writing a new plot, which took quite a bit of time. Updates will be irregular, b/c of college, but I hope you'll take a look at the new version of that story!
          	
          	If not, feel free to unfollow me and go on with your day. No judgement here. :)
          	
          	Thanks for reading! Hopefully this message makes sense, I'm pretty out of it right now.
          	
          	~Nico

elveloy

@NicoleRomero010 Thank you! That's really helpful. I was actually worried that it might be too slow, as so many people are stopping after the first chapter! lol :)
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NicoleRomero010

@elveloy Hi! I like it so far, your characters are really defined in this one; and the story is really engaging. The only criticism I might have is that it seems like everything is happening very fast, but I only just started reading, so that criticism might be moot, lol. I like your style of writing very much; fast paced dialogue and pining, lots of pining. :D
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MaliceAlina

Hi, Nicole! I have a friend who's trying her very best to gain critique for her story "Astral". It takes place in the future and there's A.I, aliens, and a girl who doubts her mate exists in the world. It deals with reincarnation, multiple universes, and two women that meet again and again during each of their lives.  She is also an incredible artist and her covers are her own creations. :) Anyway, Duen would read your work as well and really very much appreciate your feedback, thank you! :)

NicoleRomero010

Hello, Nico here! 
          I've really revamped my previous story Sunny, Bright, Winter, Night, and if you were interested in that story, I hope you'll be even more impressed by the redone  version: Sunny/Bright/Winter/Night. Unfortunately I was having a lot of trouble with plot with the previous version of the story, so I completely scrapped that story and began writing a new plot, which took quite a bit of time. Updates will be irregular, b/c of college, but I hope you'll take a look at the new version of that story!
          
          If not, feel free to unfollow me and go on with your day. No judgement here. :)
          
          Thanks for reading! Hopefully this message makes sense, I'm pretty out of it right now.
          
          ~Nico

elveloy

@NicoleRomero010 Thank you! That's really helpful. I was actually worried that it might be too slow, as so many people are stopping after the first chapter! lol :)
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NicoleRomero010

@elveloy Hi! I like it so far, your characters are really defined in this one; and the story is really engaging. The only criticism I might have is that it seems like everything is happening very fast, but I only just started reading, so that criticism might be moot, lol. I like your style of writing very much; fast paced dialogue and pining, lots of pining. :D
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elveloy

Hi Nicole, just saying thank you for reading and voting for my books, Dangerous Tension and Lunar Affair! :)

NicoleRomero010

Thank you for writing them! Always pleased to see media that reflects the true diversity of humanity. :)
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NicoleRomero010

Hey... I finally plotted out the first part of the first book of my Rediction+ series. Are any of you interested in seeing it sooner rather than later? Otherwise, I'll just finish plotting out the entire book and start making chapters then. 
          
          Thanks for reading!
          
          Nicole Romero