ok u told me to read ur book ad give feedback. i love the consent and i love dat it doesn't feel like a rough draft, the story is very interesting. but their is too much pain, nobody should leave like dat, i could feel the pain of the character. u are very good and i think u would have more reads if u lessen the pain of girl that her mother died, she was ready for college until her father sold her, and then she mets her first master who first treated her like shit, then she had to deal with his deranged half brother, and now she is with a co-co man she meant probably end up with, who is about to kill her