nickoyack

ahm. . . thanks for d follow.
          
          i did comment on the first chapter of ur work, but when i went back to it to add a few words. . . it's not their, as in 0 comment. its probably an internet glitch.
          
          so, i will just have to repost it here instead.
          
          I read the 1st chapter of your story, "Haunted" it could have been a good read, but. . . ahm. . . your delivery just didn't hit me that much. 
          
           you went directly ahead, on the first chapter, deeply rummaging the "skeletons in the closet" of each of the main casts of your story, almost divulging everything about them & not leaving anything to be unexpected of them in the later parts of your story.
          
          don't get me wrong, the main idea of your story is good, and i like it -- I commend you for that, and it wud have been a good read for me.
          
          so, continue on, you have the potential of a writer. . . . and i myt stiLL continue reading it after you have compLeted your work. 
          
          . . . and Oh, maybe you can think of another TitLe for your story as u go along writing the rest of it,  its Lavishly a redundant word in a Title in most Mystery/ThriLLer/Horror stories.
          
          MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU.

MarilynAHepburn

Hey, Nicole! Thank you for the follow! 
          OoooOOOoo... an athletic trainer. Is there a particular type of athletics that interests you more than another? I attend a professional fighters (MMA) gym. Let me tell you... they've got that body healing stuff down to a science! :)
          Thanks, again! Muah!

MarilynAHepburn

@Nicole_Witt Yes! I love my gym. But I have to say... if I had a second choice as an athletic trainer... gymnastics would be it! I did gymnastics when I was younger, and it's still one of my absolute favorite sports to watch. Such incredible athletes!
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Nicole_Witt

@MarilynAHepburn Oh wow I bet that's pretty entertaining, definitely something new every day. I was a gymnast so that really interests me, but I would also really like to work with hockey. I think that would be fun and  exciting.
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johannahefer

Thanx for the follow.❦❦❦
          I read your Bio. Good luck on your studies! My daughter is studying Sport  Psychology. It's her first year, and she is verrrrrry busy with studies. I feel so sorry for her sometimes. So I kind of think I know what you're going through.  Good luck again