#Ashley

Your welcome :) By the way the thanks are too many

Yes of course as you know the Hindi TV serials they be emotional and manipulate the audience. But you don't have to manipulate the readers, too much of being emotional is not good also just added when needed

Nida the story is very good you build up the interest for the readers to know ab her :)

Nida I feel u need build up some more interest for the readers so they would want to read ur story and rest of it is very good. I am excited to know abt New girl in the town