Nidhi41

Hi everyone! Please check out this book.  You will love it. 
          https://my.w.tt/bes1XPfGXY

Hiiiiii. I recently made a new book that I'm just sorta publishing a kinda preview on it for right now. Anywayzz, I was hoping if you could check it out and give me advice\feedback on how to make it better
          
          Title: The Dagger Of Crimsonia
          
          Link: https://my.w.tt/NIQx0juuLP

Thank you for the follow back. Hope you don't mind giving my story 'obdurate' a read. Have a nice day.