I have a question for the people who read my stories. Should I go back and edit The Hidden Disassembly Drone and The Giant and The Human to make it to when a character talks it appears on a line by itself?
Examples;
Uzi: Bite Me!
N: Biscuits!
V: And yet, I still feel nothing
The reason I'm asking this is because I currently have two more stories that I'm writing that haven't been released yet that I'm doing this with. Also, yes, I am still working on chapter 4 for The Hidden Disassembly Drone and chapter 2 for The Giant and The Human.