NightFawn

Thinking about doing a dystopian sci-fi set in the 90's!!! Wormhole in the KMART!!! Something to ponder. LMK your thoughts

sloanemrph203

This is just fantastic wow *COLD LUNCH* and I really like the vibe it’s giving off. It has that chaotic coming-of-age energy where everything starts off normal and aimless, but you can already feel something weird and dangerous slowly creeping in.
          
          The mix of emo/goth teen atmosphere, found family dynamics, and mystery makes it feel very nostalgic but unpredictable at the same time.
          
          This kind of story would work really well with short cinematic or “late-night vibe” clips like:
          “Nothing ever happened in this town… until the stranger arrived.”
          “We were bored teenagers… until time started breaking.”
          “Some nights change your life. Others erase it.”
          
          Short clips like that could do really well on TikTok, IG Reels, and YouTube Shorts because they capture the mood instantly and pull people into the mystery.
          
          If you want, I can turn one of your scenes into a sample hook-style concept so you can see what I mean.

sloanemrph203

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NightFawn

Hiya!
          
          Toying with the idea of posting Chapter 15 in its entirety tonight. If I can get it done. 
          
          I will release the final chapter next Monday!!! The whole thing. The freaking end!!! I can't believe it. 
          
          Thank you all!!!
          
          Nona's away message:
          
          Don't like cash, she don't like phonies ~~**
          She don't like junkies
          She don't like drunkies**~
          She just wants my beef bologna!!!!**

NightFawn

Hey y'all!
          
          This is just me, not Nona!! Ha.
          No AIM speak today.
          
          The novela hasn't gotten traction in this space, and that's okay. There's a space for every project, and this is very PG smut-wise and very X-rated hedonism wise in the drug and alcohol realm. It's really at its heart about the music, and early aughts culture. 
          
          I am going to take it to submittable next month when I do finish it here (3 more chapters!). 
          
          Then onto reformatting and lit journals! 
          
          Please, if you do like it, visit this piece in the next month as I finish it. Like, comment, let me know what I could improve on. 
          
          My SWFL travel guide is going live on Kindle Direct Publishing in the next 72 hours! I may post the link here. I'll try not to spam y'all with content through May while I'm still here! 
          
          Love, Brie.

NightFawn

Nona's Away Message: 
          ~**BRB working on Chapter 13!! 
          
          Chapter 12 pt. 2 OUT NAO 
          
          Can't w8 2 hit up dat barn sho this weekend ^_^
          
          TTYL~~*</3
           ~**~
          I met her at the Sonic~**~
           ~**~She was listenin' to Tonic
          With her iPod and her roller skates ~**~

NightFawn

Nona's Away Message: ~**Hi swamp donks! Chapter 11: Groupie-ish ^_^ is out now!! Well, Part 1 at least. Nobody's perfect!!  :^) TTY L8R!~~*</3
          
          And we feel like rain ~
          **~When the words all sound the same
          In the lifeless corners of this empty frame ~*