NewTaelxD

Hello, good morning/afternoon/evening to you. My name is TaelxD, and I apologize for bothering you, but I wanted to see if it would be possible for you to read and critique my Pokémon fanfic, "Pokémon: The First Step Through Kanto." It's my reinterpretation of the Pokémon world, using elements from the manga, anime, and video games to make the world much deeper, and using Red as the protagonist, but rewritten from scratch to make it work well. I know you've seen it in the Ash x Harem story in Spanish, so I wanted to know your opinion. I know that at first glance, Ash isn't the protagonist, but ignoring that detail, I highly recommend this fanfic for all the fresh things it offers. If you're interested, I'll leave a link here for you to read it, which I hope Wattpad doesn't take down. But if you're not interested, please ignore my message, and I apologize for the spam, as well as for using a Spanish-to-English translator. I wish you a happy day/afternoon/evening.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/371717523?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=NewTaelxD