Night_sky_07

Hey ya'll, It's me Night. 
          	
          	We've already reached 3k view on my new FF and thanks for all the support and reads. I'll try to release the new chapter earlier. 
          	
          	
          	One last thing, After reaching 15 chapters I'd take a 4 week break due to exams and personal reasons.. Sorry about....
          	
          	
          	Thank You....

Night_sky_07

@MauricioAraujoNeto Thx Bro.....Tho I'm still in College.....
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MauricioAraujoNeto

@Night_sky_07 I wish you success in your university exam.
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VitoriPotter16

Does your body and core mana still have any corrupted mana left, or are they fully healed?

VitoriPotter16

Your answer about Arthur using the orb to heal himself left me a bit confused. If he still had corrupted mana affecting his body and core. "Since you said that would also play a role in the future." I wonder if he still had anything in his body and core.
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Night_sky_07

@VitoriPotter16 I think I've already mentioned that.....His current body is at peak condition or even better in some acepect.....
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VitoriPotter16

Interesting chapter, Arthur is now a silver core. But I have a question if Arthur used the windsom orber, shouldn't he advance his mana core even further? Or is it just a healing orber? And what happened to Jagrette's body? Sylvie, couldn't she use her horns to get her human form? Like she did in the original story? Thank you very much for the chapter.

Night_sky_07

@VitoriPotter16 For first part,
            
            Arthur body was very weak and was laced in corrupted mana when he broke in the silver stage, his body is pretty weak compared to the Core hence the Orb was directly gone to strength and heal his body. This would also play a part in the future. 
            
            For second, Jagrette's horn is like small stump on her head which wouldn’t work nor Arthur would know use of the horns.
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Night_sky_07

Hey ya'll, It's me Night. 
          
          We've already reached 3k view on my new FF and thanks for all the support and reads. I'll try to release the new chapter earlier. 
          
          
          One last thing, After reaching 15 chapters I'd take a 4 week break due to exams and personal reasons.. Sorry about....
          
          
          Thank You....

Night_sky_07

@MauricioAraujoNeto Thx Bro.....Tho I'm still in College.....
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MauricioAraujoNeto

@Night_sky_07 I wish you success in your university exam.
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VitoriPotter16

Hi, I'm rereading your story. I understand Arthur's parents' reaction at the beginning, but as time goes by, just like Rey, Alice should start to understand that Arthur isn't to blame for anything. He had no control over anything. After all, it wasn't Arthur who was responsible for the reincarnation. And Tessia is very self-important, seriously. Arthur investigating Alacrya was very interesting. Finding out that the headmistress is from Alacrya. And Arthur and Alea's fight against Jagrette was great. I would really find it interesting. If Sylvie talked to them about Arthur (furious with Arthur's family and friends) for everything they said about him. After all, she felt everything Arthur felt later. Speaking of Sylvie, will she get her human form? I've always really liked Arthur and Sylvie's father-daughter relationship. I liked it even more when Regis showed up. He was the missing piece. This trio is incredible. I'm looking forward to when he shows up, although it always takes a long time.

Night_sky_07

@VitoriPotter16 Haha, Thx for your input...
            
            On to the first part, Rey has already started realized his short comings if you read the chapter 4 although Alice would take longer due her personality.
            
            Tessia is as you said self explanatory. 
            
            As Sylvie, She's still very young to have any impact this early on but she'd definitely in the war arc setting. 
            
            Next chapter would be interesting for Arthur's development, so stay tuned.
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VitoriPotter16

Hi, what happened? Was the chapter deleted? Sorry to bother you.

VitoriPotter16

ok, thanks.
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Night_sky_07

@VitoriPotter16 Nah It's not a bother rather I'd like it, if you were to give some inputs on the chapters you read here and then....
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VitoriPotter16

Okay, thanks for replying, sorry for bothering you.
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MauricioAraujoNeto

@Night_sky_07 Did you update the chapter from 10/05/2024 and then delete it?

MauricioAraujoNeto

Thank you for your attention in responding to my comment.
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Night_sky_07

@MauricioAraujoNeto Ah, I wasn’t supposed to publish that yet. It'd be up aging Soon.
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Night_sky_07

Hey ya'll it's me Night. I've just finished the chapter 8 of my new FF..... Just wondering if I should release it now or later?? I just have a bit editing left.... What do ya'll think?

Player085

@Night_sky_07 I don't think so
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Night_sky_07

@Player085 Aren't you a little late bro?
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Player085

@Night_sky_07 now
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VitoriPotter16

Your new story is really interesting. I have a question: when does it take place? Is it after Arthur returns as an adventurer? Isn't it clear to me? I have a question: Will Arthur still train in Epheotus? If so, will you change anything in the training? Will Arthur get a Dragon body sooner? Will Regis show up sooner or later?

Night_sky_07

@VitoriPotter16 I think I've made my timeline clear on the first chapter. It's only few months after Arthur joined the Academy. He's still 12 as in the Canon he had spent less then year at the Academy. For the needed plot and relations I still needed bit of the time in the Academy as Canon.
            
            Lastly Arthur would obvious go to Epheotus and tho I wouldn't make Op or something rather focus on his mana manipulation capacity that he couldn’t achieve in the canon due to White Core breaking within a few months of reaching that stage and other circumstances.
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