Nightmarex

Adding onto my previous post, I'll give a tease to the story. The name of the new one is "Silk". Again, still on the fence about releasing it. It's a book that's a bit..
          
          Difficult to follow. But the horror slaps hard when it does. And it's still far better.
          
          That's really it's only flaw though. Just not making sense sometimes. Which, like I said, is being fixed. 

Regarding the remake.
          
          It's been a year, I know. And it may seem as though I've quit, I most certainly haven't. 
          
          I've been working diligently on the remake for my creepypasta. I'm getting help from professional writers to point me in the right direction. I want this remake to be very impactful.
          
          In it's current state, it's great. Though, I think I'm gonna rewrite it again. 
          
          I'm pretty proud of it's current state nonetheless, and I probably will release the current one. Though, Expect yet another remake to one up the current. 
          
          The creepypasta is also getting its own OST as I've been getting the ropes of making music. Perhaps in the future I'll adapt all versions of this creepypasta into separate games you can try out. 
          
          The current one blows the other two out of the water. Though, I'm still on the fence about releasing it. I've been modifying some parts to make more sense. But the horror is far more impactful, and the cliches? Yeah, those are gone. (Finally). 
          
          So, current version vs the original.
          
          Original is getting fucking slimed. The current one literally sounds like it was written by a professional writer. (Self glaze is crazy ik).
          
          Spiderskull.zip vs the current.
          
          Spiderskull.zip also is getting fuckin' slimed by the current. 
          
          Shit, it's sequel? Also slimed.
          
          You'd have to read the current to understand how much better it's gotten. Though, it's hard to follow in some parts, and I've been fixing that, so you can count on me to make this remake worth the wait. 
          
          Thanks for tuning into my yap session, cya.

Due to how much progress was made on Spiderskull.Zip's sequel, I will be publishing it in it's unfinished state. It may sound foolish, But Y'know, I wanna give you guys a little something at least before the final remake comes out for that Spider-Man creepypasta. You guys will be shocked though, It's an outcry of the other ones, But in a good way. I'm also gonna say that the writing of the story is pretty much finished, I'm just working on the pixel art for the book

I do not remember if I ever mentioned this, But I was originally making a sequel to spiderskull.zip, but ultimately scrapped it because it didn't make sense to make a sequel. Which is why I will be making another remake. 
          
          Anyways, here's a review by me, on all my creations of the same book.
          
          
          
          Spiderman The Sinister 6 two creepypasta: Cheesy, Clichè, Stupid, and doesn't land the horror aspect at all. More funny than scary. Used gory shock descriptions of deaths that end up sounding edgy. Overall, stereotypical edgy Sonic.Exe Knockoff.
          
          
          Spiderskull.zip: Tries a bit too hard to be better, often over describing things. More well written, less Grammer mistakes. However, the ending fell flat and felt completely sudden, still suffered from using shock value, in fact using too much, was not scary despite effort being seen, and lastly was way too long and felt monotonous. Overall, it was better. But it was not executed very well.
          
          
          Silk (Upcoming remake): Perfectly manages to balance accuracy to the original while improving upon a lot of the weaker aspects of the remake, and even staying true to the original in a sense. Also lands it's horror and shock value in a natural and fluid way. The story has an amazing hook, not wasting any time either on setting a dark tone to the story. Also has very good language used, being similar to Godzilla NES's style. Overall, Manages to faithfully recreate it in a fashion that just feels like it was finally done right, and even feeling fresh, offering some new spins on the plot. In other words, this story properly captures what I visioned with some changes to make it unique and stand out.

For those unaware, I am working on a sequel to Spiderskull.zip. I felt the ending was abrupt and unnecessary. So, My sequel surprisingly manages to muster a wah to explain things. So far, I am on chapter 4

Oh, What's this? https://youtu.be/9nivV8Dad7o?si=dmNcQEGjtdfOMVg-      

So there's 2 things I'd like to announce. Firstly, I'm making a Friday Night Funkin' Cover of a song. It does happen to involve spiderskull. (I do make games on scratch, so bear with the limitations). Other thing, I feel the last story's ending was quite sudden, and didn't make sense very much. I plan to rewrite spiderskull one last time, HOWEVER, making it where it can have a sequel :) I've recently been taking notes from many good creepypasta stories, and I've already found ways I could make it stay true to the Very boring trope it followed, while still bringing so much new things that creepypasta has done much, or not done.

Should I rewrite spider skull.zip one last time next year? Maybe I'll make a sequel, But I think where it ended made perfect sense to me. Unless I come up with some crazy plot twist LOL

FULL BOOK IS OUT! Enjoy the finished and polished creepypasta! I put a lot of effort into the story, So please understand that horror is a new genre for me! If it isn't that good, again my apologies! 

Yo thanks for reading my book! I put a lot of effort into it and I got a medal! It's #215 on haunted