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Due to how much progress was made on Spiderskull.Zip's sequel, I will be publishing it in it's unfinished state. It may sound foolish, But Y'know, I wanna give you guys a little something at least before the final remake comes out for that Spider-Man creepypasta. You guys will be shocked though, It's an outcry of the other ones, But in a good way. I'm also gonna say that the writing of the story is pretty much finished, I'm just working on the pixel art for the book

Nightmarex505isback

Due to how much progress was made on Spiderskull.Zip's sequel, I will be publishing it in it's unfinished state. It may sound foolish, But Y'know, I wanna give you guys a little something at least before the final remake comes out for that Spider-Man creepypasta. You guys will be shocked though, It's an outcry of the other ones, But in a good way. I'm also gonna say that the writing of the story is pretty much finished, I'm just working on the pixel art for the book

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I do not remember if I ever mentioned this, But I was originally making a sequel to spiderskull.zip, but ultimately scrapped it because it didn't make sense to make a sequel. Which is why I will be making another remake. 
          
          Anyways, here's a review by me, on all my creations of the same book.
          
          
          
          Spiderman The Sinister 6 two creepypasta: Cheesy, Clichè, Stupid, and doesn't land the horror aspect at all. More funny than scary. Used gory shock descriptions of deaths that end up sounding edgy. Overall, stereotypical edgy Sonic.Exe Knockoff.
          
          
          Spiderskull.zip: Tries a bit too hard to be better, often over describing things. More well written, less Grammer mistakes. However, the ending fell flat and felt completely sudden, still suffered from using shock value, in fact using too much, was not scary despite effort being seen, and lastly was way too long and felt monotonous. Overall, it was better. But it was not executed very well.
          
          
          Silk (Upcoming remake): Perfectly manages to balance accuracy to the original while improving upon a lot of the weaker aspects of the remake, and even staying true to the original in a sense. Also lands it's horror and shock value in a natural and fluid way. The story has an amazing hook, not wasting any time either on setting a dark tone to the story. Also has very good language used, being similar to Godzilla NES's style. Overall, Manages to faithfully recreate it in a fashion that just feels like it was finally done right, and even feeling fresh, offering some new spins on the plot. In other words, this story properly captures what I visioned with some changes to make it unique and stand out.

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So there's 2 things I'd like to announce. Firstly, I'm making a Friday Night Funkin' Cover of a song. It does happen to involve spiderskull. (I do make games on scratch, so bear with the limitations). Other thing, I feel the last story's ending was quite sudden, and didn't make sense very much. I plan to rewrite spiderskull one last time, HOWEVER, making it where it can have a sequel :) I've recently been taking notes from many good creepypasta stories, and I've already found ways I could make it stay true to the Very boring trope it followed, while still bringing so much new things that creepypasta has done much, or not done.

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Meant to say Hasn't, Bear with my Grammer mistakes
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