I created this profile a while ago to get my work out there and get constructive feedback. Since then life got in the way and we welcomed 2 beautiful little girls into our stronghold (Exposition: I have twins. Daughters).
They mean the world to me and I now wish to get the ball rolling.
I decided to start with 'The New Horsemen', because it's easy to follow and easy to write. It's a straight forward story about three characters trying to get strong enough to defeat the main bad guy.
Please like and follow, but most importantly, please comment. Tell me what works and what doesn't. How else am I to move forward?
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- Johannesburg, South Africa
- JoinedDecember 5, 2014
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Story by Broswan Brown
- 1 Published Story
The New Horsemen
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When Warren, your typical below average teen, is told that he is one of the Horsemen of the Apocalypse, his l...
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