Ok, I have to say I absolutely loved this story. I'm am such a bookworm and have only recently read all of the BDB series. Your attention to detail and your way of making the story flow was seemless. I was saddened at first when V died, but you wrote his part so brilliantly that it made the story so... Perfect. I used to write fanfic way back and was always a stickler for twists and turns, but more so for back story. (LOTR; Legolas junkie once upon a time ). I really really love your writing style it kept me interested... drove my kids nuts as I couldn't focus on the bitching because I was so into it. I can imagine you as you were writing... playing the scenes out to every minute detail in your mind, exploring the different scenarios that could lead from one thing to the next...
Bravo, I look forward to ignoring my hell spawn again soon with a sequel of BJ/ Malina and Mhurder/Tahtia, as well as Jhinx and Sykes' stories.