Nikki_Mclusky

I have draft #2 of my first short story for kids (ages 7-11) if anyone would like to give it a read and give me some feedback that would be brilliant please and thank you!
          	
          	Drop me a message and ill work out how to upload it!
          	
          	NB all material - even drafts - is under copyright laws in my name so please be honest, don't nick it, enjoy it and let me know how I can improve upon it! xx

Nikki_Mclusky

I have draft #2 of my first short story for kids (ages 7-11) if anyone would like to give it a read and give me some feedback that would be brilliant please and thank you!
          
          Drop me a message and ill work out how to upload it!
          
          NB all material - even drafts - is under copyright laws in my name so please be honest, don't nick it, enjoy it and let me know how I can improve upon it! xx