Jesse165

Hi, I hope everything is alright with you. I hope you can continue with your story cause I just love it. I have a few ideas for the other arcs if you would use them. 
          For Tenrou island you could have that the celestial king gives Lucy a special necklace to wear for the s class test. The necklace would transfer their souls to another world while their bodies stay within the fairy sphere. They would stay in the world for 4 or 3 years for them but 7 in their original world to train. This way they have more time to train and learn new things, especially for Lucy. The whole celestial mage concept should have been very powerful but it's not for some reason. You could give her new spells with her spirits, use magic that has to do with the plants or what I really hoped for Lucy is to merge with her celestial keys.  I know Star Dress is her using some of the spirit's power but I think it would be more better or powerful if she could use their full potential. Like the key is limiting their powers while merging with them allows her to use their full power. 
          For example: Leo - could be a werelion with a collar that has the symbol of leo and she can change form a werelion to a lioness but this has it ups and downs. In this form she would have a tough hide like the Nemean lion and claws that could cut magic. This in turn would give her great strength and defense but have lower stamina. 
          Something like that with either some or all if you want with the others.
          Natsu meets Zeref and tells him to leave while Zeref sense something different about Natsu. As for Grimore hearts that is up to you.
          I really hope that this can help you in any way and for you to continue your story. If you like my ideas and want me to help you get any ideas for the upcoming arcs I would gladly help.

pyraprica

Hey u good right I hope this is not pressuring you but me and a lot of other people are waiting for you to continue the book we really love it hope u can come back soon after solving whatever that is holding you back 

CelestiaArcheron

Goodnight,
          
          Guys I get you want an update from the author but you might be overwhelming her. For all you know she could be dealing with a many things so just be patient.
          
          Other than that this is a great book and wonderful idea I hope you are well.

Asta_Dragneel_Star

When are they going to meet kagura? Is Millianna still going to join mermaid heel or are her and kagura going to be in a different guild so that Simon can join and be with his sister.
          
          I also have a suggestion. Since Simon didn't die kagura wouldn't be out for jellal's death, so that wouldn't have the impact on her like it did in the previous timeline. So instead of her being all locked up and kept to herself and her harsh/cold demeanor before you get to know her. 
          
          Maybe she could be not all giddy giddy cause that's going to far off her original personality. So maybe she could be like more open up to others and actually smiles and shows emotions, but not full out giddy. Sort of like how erza is once she opened up.

Moonless2Night8

This novel is so great. I can't wait for an update. I can tell you and I am pretty sure everyone here would agree, with your talent for writing you could become a  famous  author. Best of luck from your  devoted fans.

Asta_Dragneel_Star

@Moonless2Night8 i agree! Tho i'm not finished reading it yet
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