Hey Eloise!!
I’m legit up to part 2 of your book and i’m already so interested! The story so far is amazingly written with great descriptions. And the way you introduce new characters never seems to bore me You’re style of writing is so easy to understand and this makes it so much fun to read. I’m really enjoying the pace of the book, the storyline and the characters! I think you’re doing a great job so far bro
I did notice in part 2 that there were some paragraphs that were repeating what the last paragraph said. So maybe you should take a look at that cause it can be kinda confusing!
Anyways, i’m gonna go back to reading your amazing book And I hope that this helped you Eloise!!
