@Nikolehoran_ Hope I don't offend. What I've read so far in chapter one is good. However, there are a few grammatical errors. That's the only reason why I asked.
I sent you a link to a book that really inspired me to keep in mind to also proof read, even after I publish a chapter. I encourage you to do the same. Trust me it makes a big difference when getting and keeping readers. I've added a couple of wattpad book guides in my library to help authors be successful in wattpad. Feel free to look through them or I can message you the links if you'd like
Not trying to be critical in a negative. Just trying to help
