Nikox0x

Hii
          	I just finished the chapter and tbh I don't have any criticism for it. The conversations went nice and well, there weren't any exaggerated dramas and the character development started. In addition I think this chapter came out really nice, also I like the way you separate the different scenes and parts.

Seong_ie

HEY! ik it’s been a long time since i updated just wanted to let you know im gnna be carrying on with the minsung ff! very soon, so keep an eye out for a new chapter.

Nikox0x

@Seong_ie I'm really happy you like them! Good luck on your exams and I hope I can hear from you soon!!
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Seong_ie

@Nikox0x I LOVEEEEE THESE IDEAS!! i do know how this story is going to end but i am defo gnna use these! i do have my final exams coming up so i am just getting some ideas down for some chapters and then i will fully write them after my exams! but i will let you know once’s i begin to write again ! thank you so much for your support ❣️
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Nikox0x

@Seong_ie Hi again! I have some ideas for your story! Firstly I don't know how long you want to make it but I think there's still a lot that can happen maybe 10 chapters or so. But that's your decision oo course :))
            So I was thinking what if Jisung and Minho meet Minho's mom after one of their dates? It doesn't have to be a big argument but it could get some reaction from each side. The mother sees that they are happy but still refuses to acknowledge their relationship. Just a suggestion I had in mind but maybe you can work with it. Also when they're in school, people will probably gossip about them, and theor friends will defend them meaning they support them to the fullest. 
            Hope you like these and I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck amd have a nice day!
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Nikox0x

Hii
          I just finished the chapter and tbh I don't have any criticism for it. The conversations went nice and well, there weren't any exaggerated dramas and the character development started. In addition I think this chapter came out really nice, also I like the way you separate the different scenes and parts.

Seong_ie

Hey! since ur so supportive and an amazing fan of my writing i would love to get some feedback from you the pros and cons of my writing so far…since this is my first ever story i dont expect it to be amazing :) (p.s  your my fav reader :) )

Seong_ie

thank you! i appreciate it :))
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Nikox0x

@Seong_ie Hii! I would love to help with  that, I'm not much of a writer myself but I know a thing or two so I'll let you know if I have something that you should work on. I'll go through the chapters first and see what's it like now :))
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