Nikox0x

Hii
          	I just finished the chapter and tbh I don't have any criticism for it. The conversations went nice and well, there weren't any exaggerated dramas and the character development started. In addition I think this chapter came out really nice, also I like the way you separate the different scenes and parts.

Nikox0x

Hii
          I just finished the chapter and tbh I don't have any criticism for it. The conversations went nice and well, there weren't any exaggerated dramas and the character development started. In addition I think this chapter came out really nice, also I like the way you separate the different scenes and parts.

Seong_ie

Hey! since ur so supportive and an amazing fan of my writing i would love to get some feedback from you the pros and cons of my writing so far…since this is my first ever story i dont expect it to be amazing :) (p.s  your my fav reader :) )

Seong_ie

thank you! i appreciate it :))
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Nikox0x

@Seong_ie Hii! I would love to help with  that, I'm not much of a writer myself but I know a thing or two so I'll let you know if I have something that you should work on. I'll go through the chapters first and see what's it like now :))
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