NinaKuni

@jeffhondo Thanks for the information and your opinion on everything. You weren't criticizing my work at all it was just a spelling error.

jeffhondo

@hannahgute57 Thanks for getting back to me.  I hope you know that I wasn't criticizing you for typos but that I thought the idea of "deifying" something, Nature (and thus your characters), was pretty cool.  But so is defying it.  So your spelling error led to some very interesting plot lines and ideas.  Anyway, I really enjoy your work.

NinaKuni

@jeffhondo Sorry I havent gotn back to you. I haven't checked my messgaes lately. My friend pointed out to me the extra "i" in Defying Nature a few weeks ago and I went to change it. There is only one "i" in my title so it's just Defying Nature instead of Deifying Nature. It was a spelling error and I fixed it.
          I'm glad you like my book and I'll try to update it soon. I'm working on two other books (FML Camp and WYT) at the moment so it may be a little wait.
          Thanks for reading!

jeffhondo

I'm sorry if this is a repeat question, I thought I posted it yesterday but it's not here.  So, on one part of your page you call your book Deifying Nature, but in another part you call it Defying Nature (no "i").  Both titles work and lead to very interesting but vastly different paths down which your characters can go.  If it is Deifying Nature, that implies the elevation to god status of nature and those character traits that are applied to your story.  Like Sun being elevated to that level.  If it is Defying Nature (no "i"), your characters might head down that path where they are pushing against the constraints of their natural instincts and tendencies.  That is, where Jack and Sun might have some obstacles or hurdles to overcome that are based in their individual traits.  For example, Sun might melt Jack.  Which title is correct?  Both have such interesting ways to go.  Your idea is fun and creative.  Regardless of which direction you take them, keep writing.  You are talented!