Lauren

@daughterofapollo99 Sure

@18mlove hi. You read mah story?

Hi

Hello Lauren, I finished reading "The Pointe is We Were Kidnapped" (TPIWWK) 
          
          Honestly, I found it a bit plain and boring because there wasn't a lot of detail.
          
          The story itself needs detail no matter what genre the writer is writing. 
          An example of telling: The wolf jumped above the pond.
          
          An example of showing: The wolfs silver gray fur gleamed in the harsh sunlight. The wolves green eye became bright as if spotted a pond ahead. It soon began to speed up its pace gaining up speed every second. As it reached the puddle it leaped up in the air and landed on the other side of the pond.  (Sorry .. bad example :c)
          
          There were grammar issues here and there. So.. 
          Paige and her friends have gotten kidnapped, by maybe the government.  They will need to find what there powers or strengths are, and will probably use them as weapons, or maybe use their "families" against them so they follow directions.
          
          Ehh, just a guess. >< If I'm right then that's pretty cool. D
          
          I'm sorry about the short delay. I hope my comment helps you in your future creations. Thank you for reading ans commenting your honest thoughts on "Silence". Hope to see you soon when a update arrives. :3
          
          |~Angel~|

@1D_potter HAII Did you watch any vlogbrothers yet?

*waves a fan*
          
          Can't wait to start reading c:

I hope you're liking Touching The Untouchable so far and thanks for adding it your reading list. I always appreciate votes and comments also. :)

@DrewAltheo No prob. its really good :)

Hi love! Thanks for adding my PJ fan fic to your library! I hope you like it so far! Bear hugs and underwater kisses xx 

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