Ninjamario246

Alright. Listen up.
          	TLDR is that I'm continuing Enter the Monsterverse. Despite the idea of Kaiju's talking being a turn-off for a lot of people, I had to realise that no matter what I do, there will always be people that don't agree with me. It's a fools errand to go back on everything I've worked on, all the emotions I've felt just because I'm scared someone won't like it. That's not what this was ever about.
          	
          	Just as long as I am passionate, care deeply about this franchise and listen to feedback where it counts, I'll be fine. I just have to trust in myself. If I like it, someone else will.
          	
          	HOWEVER, I don't want this to be my legacy.
          	I love Enter the Monsterverse, I love what I've done here... But the truth is that this world isn't entirely mine. The story, some of the characters, and the overall plot is, but the baseline is that this is a fan story done out of love. It will NEVER be entirely mine.
          	
          	Therefore, once I'm finished posting Chapter 8 of PM, and the rest of the ETM chapters (They're being posted this month I'm gonna start working on them immediately after I've posted this), I'm gonna work on an original story.
          	
          	I want something to call my own. Something that represents... Me. Enter the Monsterverse was my first love, but it is by no means where my story ends.
          	
          	What I'll do with this original story is anyone's guess. I'll be brainstorming as I write ETM and stuff, I think I've got some ideas for it.
          	
          	Anyway, yeah. ETM or PM aint cancelled. Imma go brainstorm ideas and write now, bub bye

Panheadbu1

@Ninjamario246 nice I will be waiting for the next chapter patiently.
          	  And this is honestly one of the best Godzilla fanfics I have read, really good quality and good writing
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Ninjamario246

Whether I start an animation series of ETM is also up in the air right now. It depends on how the rewrite turns out and whether or not I want to put my original story first.
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Ninjamario246

Alright. Listen up.
          TLDR is that I'm continuing Enter the Monsterverse. Despite the idea of Kaiju's talking being a turn-off for a lot of people, I had to realise that no matter what I do, there will always be people that don't agree with me. It's a fools errand to go back on everything I've worked on, all the emotions I've felt just because I'm scared someone won't like it. That's not what this was ever about.
          
          Just as long as I am passionate, care deeply about this franchise and listen to feedback where it counts, I'll be fine. I just have to trust in myself. If I like it, someone else will.
          
          HOWEVER, I don't want this to be my legacy.
          I love Enter the Monsterverse, I love what I've done here... But the truth is that this world isn't entirely mine. The story, some of the characters, and the overall plot is, but the baseline is that this is a fan story done out of love. It will NEVER be entirely mine.
          
          Therefore, once I'm finished posting Chapter 8 of PM, and the rest of the ETM chapters (They're being posted this month I'm gonna start working on them immediately after I've posted this), I'm gonna work on an original story.
          
          I want something to call my own. Something that represents... Me. Enter the Monsterverse was my first love, but it is by no means where my story ends.
          
          What I'll do with this original story is anyone's guess. I'll be brainstorming as I write ETM and stuff, I think I've got some ideas for it.
          
          Anyway, yeah. ETM or PM aint cancelled. Imma go brainstorm ideas and write now, bub bye

Panheadbu1

@Ninjamario246 nice I will be waiting for the next chapter patiently.
            And this is honestly one of the best Godzilla fanfics I have read, really good quality and good writing
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Ninjamario246

Whether I start an animation series of ETM is also up in the air right now. It depends on how the rewrite turns out and whether or not I want to put my original story first.
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Ninjamario246

I think I've come to a descision on what I'm gonna do going forward. I'm gonna sleep on it before I say anything, but if all goes well then you guys don't need to worry about it being cancelled.
          
          Thank you guys for the feedback, it means the world to me. I'll see ya'll in a couple of days hopefully when I've ascertained what I want to do.
          Love ya'll.

godzilla2pojnt9j

also unsure if youve thought about this or if you answered it in a earlier chapter, but whats goin on up at the surface in pacific mayhem? theyd be around the duoble event or so id think

Ninjamario246

@godzilla2pojnt9j What's going on in the surface is being kept intentionally vague, mainly because I want it to be a surprise, and also because I wanna make sure I land on a good idea before showing it off. Just a reminder by the way that Pacific Mayhem has no ties to Pacific Rim OR GxK: A New Empire anymore, I initially wanted it to, but decided against it after a lil bit of thought. I want this story to remain strictly a godzilla story that has its own plot that branches off from the main monsterverse plotline so I can have more freedom to do more things, yadda yadda yadda, you get it.
            
            You gotta remember, it's been 6 Years since Kiryu disappeared, some things have probably changed drastically in that time. >:)
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godzilla2pojnt9j

hello there, just putting this here to ask if you could put the character art from chapter 6 at the top of the newer chapters or such? having a little trouble remembering what they look like halfway through a reread and i think putting the art of characters thatll be in the chapter at the top would be a good idea! you do you and very excited for number 8!

godzilla2pojnt9j

ah ok thank you! cant wait to see the new piece!
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Ninjamario246

@godzilla2pojnt9j I was actually thinking about putting a new art piece featuring Kiryu and Luna at the bottom of every Chapter, but if you want I can make that at the top. Appreciate the feedback!
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Ninjamario246

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Alright, legitimate question for you guys:
          For the people who have read Chapter 7 of Pacific Mayhem, what are your general thoughts on the chapter?
          I am personally a tiny bit dissatisfied with certain parts of it, namely the conversation during the valley before the Strix, but I wanted to know your guys thoughts on it, bad and good.
          
          I've been writing Chapter 8 and re-reading chapter 7 and there are some parts of it that feel... unfocused, if that makes any sense. I kinda wanna go back and change those specific segments to better fit with what I've got planned, but I feel like they work well enough for the time being.
          
          If it really bothers me, I'll change em and tell you guys. Otherwise, I gotta leave shit alone and focus on getting some new stuff out. Maybe when Chapter 8 has been released I'll do some light editing and rewriting to those segments to give them a bit more ooomph.
          
          Anyway, please tell me what ya'll thought. I'd love to know, Chapter 8 is coming along a nicer that 7 was, so that'll be hopefully soon.

Ninjamario246

That means a lot, thanks for the feedback. I think I just need to remain a tiny bit more focused on what I want from now on. Chapter 7's work flow was turbulent as hell, so I guess it makes sense that it isn't perfect. I'll think about tweaking it at some point, maybe after Chapter 1 of the rewrite and Chapter 8 have released
            
            I'm glad to know you liked it, means a lot.
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Vokun-Morgan

@ Ninjamario246  tbh from what i remember when i first read it, it wasn't bad and i liked it but i might re-read it again now since i had first read it when it came out and that was a sometime ago, so for now from what i remember it's a good chapter
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Ninjamario246

I'm gonna try my hardest to outdo myself when the next true fight scene of Pacific Mayhem comes along, I really think I could do better. 
          
          Been thinking about the fight scene in Chapter 6 actually, it's not a bad fight scene, but it's probably the weakest part of the entire chapter, so I wanna give that whole setting another shot at some point. Get real creative with it.

Ninjamario246

not gonna rewrite it by the way, besides the ETM rewrite and rewriting chapter 1 of PM at some point, I think I'm done with rewrites. All of the chapters are good enough as is.
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Ninjamario246

Alright, I'm gonna just pin this for later, I hope this will ward off some of the bots or fuckos that come in here, even know I know it wont.
          
          I am not interested in your offers to turn my stories into comic books or other visual mediums, nor am I looking for collaborations of any kind. I am a capable artist in my own right and I do not need your help to turn these stories into animations or drawings. That is something I will do for myself.
          
          I appreciate the few offers I've gotten, but I'm just not interested. Chances are if you're looking for work or clients to draw for, you shouldn't be looking in a fanfiction website of all places. Any comments asking to collab are going to be deleted, and repeated spam will result in a block, so please keep the comments strictly related the story and things relating to said story.
          
          Thank you for coming to my TedTalk.

Ninjamario246

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As for the people who care about the story, sorry about this. I just figured I'd put this here early while I still have the chance, since I have friends who've also dealt with this shit. Better to be safe than sorry.
            
            Anyway, we are officially out of the chapter 7 drout. I wrote close to 3000 words last night for the ETM Rewrite.
            
            We are officially back, lads.
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