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crap, i goofed on those!...however, theyre just minor technicallities....and it IS an IF sorta story so, maybe i can can get by with it and just fix it in later chapters?? thanks for the heads up!

@Sanmanfred25 I'm liking it so far. Though I thought Ram could not smell the witches scent because of no horn. And I believe Beatrice's nickname is "Beako" and "Betty" and not "Beahiko," though it does not bother me too much. Keep up the good writing. ✍️ 

@Sanmanfred25 thanks! I've been writing for years and have improved over time

@Sanmanfred25, I like the character Haruma and his relationship and interactions with other characters.