Love your X-Men fanfic, it's great! Seriously, the quality of the writing is really good and the plotline is brilliant. You've got the characters spot on, and, honestly, it's probably the best fanfiction I've read in a long time! I couldn't stop reading it!!! =) Eric and Charles were perfect, especially the way they reacted and acted together and Charles' injury wasn't played down. You must have had to do a lot of research for that!! =) Overall, great fanfiction, you should write another one =) because you're really good at it!! =) =) =)