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Hi guys!!
          I'd like to appreciate if you give a try to my new book. It's my first time writing one so there are many ways i can improve. Your suggestions are valuable. 
          Book: Love the way you lie.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/358252791?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=snikers1508&wp_originator=M4MUrGVHn7CJwdGDTVKXP65HO7TleJu1Ls7E1ug4aj2nKygmwDzYrPCExAIeNbNNiilmEak2IlepY6Xl6RLCeNeXEqWWDUV9FdcMKKL5LgZQ4f6Y%2B%2BkC50JYpy7nZ5JR
          

Hi. When will be the second part of Locked down in lockdown? That story was so amazing! You're a great storyteller.