123456bhoomi
I love your stories but I would like to give you one suggestion if you like it plzz use it in your 2 story
The suggestion is that children of jbhai and munchkin arguing over jasmin
zoet_hekitten
Dii you are writing well ab aly ke gusse ke baad ganesh chaturthi ka daliye uske baad ladakh n yes plz add jas on period in between!!! THANK YOU N SORRY IF DIDN'T LIKED MY SUGGESTIONS LOVE YOU