Nishtha saini

Hii 
          Can you pls checkout my ff? Actually i am a young and new writer so I want feedback. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/363161432?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Nandini_0010
          
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