tylerKelly25
I'm honestly liking this story. I'm making my own story like this, but with only peppino trapped in hell. This is cinema.
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Sonicboom2109t
It’s me the air vibrations from hit inlive game jizz towel
Sonicboom2109t
Also you HAVE to tell me how to write funny haha cartoon logic and,, general sentence structure,,
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FUCKIN' FINALLY! MID HAS RECIVED A NEW CHAPTER! This is NOT a drill!
Yeah, so uh... first episode covered, 7 more to go... pray for me, y'all... I'm gonna need it...
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Chapter 4 is OUT! Go give it a read, and sorry for all the melodrama towards the end, I promise I’ll return to my regular goofy writing at some point. Also, I may have caught a case of Ian Flynn with a few references, so sorry about that too…
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Chapter 4 is underway, and will be the last chapter before I begin retelling the events of the show itself (Essentially, Pep and Noise showed up in the downtime between the pilot & episode one (Overture)), so somewhere within that week, these two little freaks showed up, met everyone, and had their first day, and then time skip a few days into the future for Episode One. That’s the timeline I’m going with, and thank you for watching my Game Theory…
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@mrnotcringe29 I’m thinking about adding a few songs here and there, maybe one of those singing fights Hazbin is so fond of for some reason
mrnotcringe29
@NitroRVL Also, i Really like how accurate you nailed Peppino and Noise's personalities
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Chapter 3 is OUT, finally… go read it if you want, and then tell me how shit it really is, OK?…
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Chapter 2 was ready for a REALLY long time, I just wasn’t feeling motivated. Chapter 3 is coming whenever I get off my ass and start writing again…