Justromcoms

Hey there Nithya,
          
          You can delete this message from your board if you're annoyed. I don't mind at all. In fact, I don't fancy people showing up randomly either.
          
          But it sounds lame to apologize for something I've done on purpose. After all, this is a conversation board; not a message board. And hence, I took a chance to post here. You're on wattpad, so you have the right to be introduced to good books. So I introduce you to BOMBAY ROMANCE.
          
          Is my book good? Well, that's for you to judge. Many of my readers think so, though. And I would love to have readers who comment as they traverse the chapters, aka, you!
          
          So what does my story have? That's for you to unravel as you read. I can tell what it does NOT have:
          
          • Billionaire CEO/ Mafia hero
          • Forced/ Contract/ Revenge marriage
          • Love triangle 
          • Abuse, Trauma and Toxicity
          • Smartphones, Mobile phones, Internet, Social Media ... 
          
          The last point got you thinking? Check out the story once! If it disappoints, well, I don't know. Because I'm pretty sure it won't.
          
          Thanks for reading this message, if not anything else. Else, I'll meet you in my story:)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/344903285?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Justromcoms

chhayani

@Nitya_writes If you're asking about your poems, then those were really great, the introduction and the way it reached the conclusion, everything was good. You can write really well. 
          If you're asking about other poems that I read then I usually read Hindi poems, like Madhushaalaa other poems of Harivansh rai bachhan and poems of Naraj Rahat Indori because their poems aren't focused only on heartbreak and love and pain, but how to deal with them. 
          
          On Wattpad, I am reading me inside of me, which tells deep emotions which get tangled up and we can't understand those easily. 
          About Bhairava, I have known him since I started worshipping for the first time. I have read the Abhichar book which tells about different forms of bhairav and Bhairavi. You can also read Kaal Bhairav Rahasyam and there is so much information about Him on beer biceps channel.

chhayani

Your continuous votes really make my heart beat faster... Thank you so much...
          Can you do me a favour? Can you honestly tell me that how the story was? Like an honest review........

Nitya_writes

@chhayani then you are my didi (i am 18) 
            can you give me the review regarding the poems that you read?
            and you are a devotee of bhairav baba so can you recommend any books or articles regarding him where i can know him a little (i am an amateur (⁠^⁠～⁠^⁠;⁠)⁠ゞ
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chhayani

@Nitya_writes thankyou so much for this review, I will try to improve the pacre, keeping it slow, revealing information slowly, yes I also think joothan could have been explained better 
            About Ravana, the main idea was to convey that a man who is already in a relationship tries to make physical contact with another person. He cosplays Rama but doesn't have control over her lusty desires. But yes, rape is forcible intercourse with a person, I will keep that in mind. I will try to explore thoughts and feelings of the mc more so that the story looks realistic. 
            
            My age is 21....
            
            Again thank you so much for putting efforts in giving the review. It means a lot as I am new in writing. It takes a lot of time to give the review while having a tight schedule, so I am really really grateful for that. Thanks ..... :⁠-⁠):⁠-⁠)
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Nitya_writes

@chhayani about talking with a ghost I will comment later( will again go through it and come back)
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Shivran86

Thank you for giving Daughters of Kalika a chance ❤️

Nitya_writes

@Shivran86 definately
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Shivran86

@Nitya_writes good to hear that you are having a nice time!
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Nitya_writes

@Shivran86 till now i am enjoying each chapter
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