Nixieaquawrites

 the message thing on Wattpad stopped working completely ;-;

kNGT_fringed_gentian

@Nixieaquawrites
          Hi,
          I really like your story so far, but I do have some advice. I haven't read all of it yet, but I noticed that your tenses keep switching between present and past, like where it says , "Nixie giggled and Vian sighs." You should really just choose one of them and stick to it. 
          That's not the only thing I've noticed, but I don't exactly feel confident sharing it all. (I'm very new to Wattpad.) If you'd like to hear more, please let me know. You can also let me know if you'd rather not.

kNGT_fringed_gentian

Sorry, I forgot to write this earlier: Congratulations on your 8 followers already! (If you want to chat more, just DM me.)
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kNGT_fringed_gentian

@Nixieaquawrites 
            I'm glad, but I'm not sure you'd say that if you saw my writing ;) And no need for the apology. I'm permitted limited hours online myself.
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Nixieaquawrites

Of course! I’d love to learn from you and I apologize for the late response 
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