@mamo888 sorry for the late reply, just got out of college. I reread your chapters, so far you have Tord on vacation due to his army failing and he meets up with Edd, matt, and Tom. Tries to kill himself and now is at Tom's apartment, so the next chapter should be talking. Tord asking how they are and why they were in Norway, Tom also asks some questions if you want. They also need to go to bed so Tom probably offers his bed to Tord, Tom sleeps on the couch. Tord probably would get a nightmare and have a panic attack and get up and ask Tom to sleep with him. Once settled they goto sleep, now you can end the chapter there or continue. After you post that if you still need more help I can help.