Niyosha_am

Since it's my first fanfic i regularly come edit a line or two that didn't get a touch of sense lol . But don't worry the general idea  is still on, and the dialogues resemble the characters.   Just writer's point of view in parts sucks hehe
          	I might upload a new one soon ~

Niyosha_am

@Niyosha_am Thank you so much for cheering me up i feel much better now . First fanfic because i usually write short one shot scenarios but now I'm working on a longer story to tell so i should know it's gonna be a different experience.
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Minzouayoongi

@Niyosha_am That’s honestly such a mood 
          	  
          	  First of all — the fact that you keep coming back to tweak lines? That’s not a bad thing. That’s literally what writers do. Editing a sentence because it “didn’t make sense” just means you care about how it reads. That’s growth, not failure.
          	  
          	  And if the general idea is still solid and the dialogue sounds like the characters? You’re already winning. Plot + in-character dialogue are way harder to nail than a slightly awkward narrator line. Writer POV can always be polished later — that’s the easy part.
          	  
          	  Also, first fanfic?? Of course it’s not going to be perfect. It’s not supposed to be. The important thing is:
          	  
          	  You’re writing.
          	  
          	  You’re improving.
          	  
          	  You’re brave enough to share it.
          	  
          	  And ooo  a new one soon?? I love that. Drop it when you’re ready — I bet it’ll be even better than the last.
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Niyosha_am

Since it's my first fanfic i regularly come edit a line or two that didn't get a touch of sense lol . But don't worry the general idea  is still on, and the dialogues resemble the characters.   Just writer's point of view in parts sucks hehe
          I might upload a new one soon ~

Niyosha_am

@Niyosha_am Thank you so much for cheering me up i feel much better now . First fanfic because i usually write short one shot scenarios but now I'm working on a longer story to tell so i should know it's gonna be a different experience.
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Minzouayoongi

@Niyosha_am That’s honestly such a mood 
            
            First of all — the fact that you keep coming back to tweak lines? That’s not a bad thing. That’s literally what writers do. Editing a sentence because it “didn’t make sense” just means you care about how it reads. That’s growth, not failure.
            
            And if the general idea is still solid and the dialogue sounds like the characters? You’re already winning. Plot + in-character dialogue are way harder to nail than a slightly awkward narrator line. Writer POV can always be polished later — that’s the easy part.
            
            Also, first fanfic?? Of course it’s not going to be perfect. It’s not supposed to be. The important thing is:
            
            You’re writing.
            
            You’re improving.
            
            You’re brave enough to share it.
            
            And ooo  a new one soon?? I love that. Drop it when you’re ready — I bet it’ll be even better than the last.
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Niyosha_am

When i was little i used to write fanfic using Animation characters !! I was a bomb of ideas back then but the way i described them sucked lol . I don't know if i can rewrite them some day . :)

Niyosha_am

@Yinwar_Vmin I hope so too maybe one day I'll bring back those old memories :)
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Yinwar_Vmin

@Niyosha_am you can
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Niyosha_am

Wanted to write a Vmin story as well called " I won't let you disappear" which is quite the drama, but I'm still stuck with Curious pink berry and my scattered ideas about it hehe ^^

Niyosha_am

@Yinwar_Vmin I'm still trying to organise the story in my head lol
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Yinwar_Vmin

@Niyosha_am am excited you should upload it
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VelvetMafiaTales

@Niyosha_am
          Thank you for following me
          I was a  story  in telegram

VelvetMafiaTales

@VelvetMafiaTales   no need to thank me 
            Welcome to Wattpad enjoy time here 
            Ohh okay
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Niyosha_am

@VelvetMafiaTales your welcome... since I'm a newbie i follow back and vote back usually
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ParkRimin95

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Niyosha_am

@ParkRimin95 I voted for you
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Niyosha_am

@ParkRimin95 Sounds good ! Vmin is my favourite
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