NoName1111111q

I MEANT TO CLICK ON THE PREVIEW BUTTON NOT THE PUBLISH ONE. False alarm sorry. Still expect the actual chapter to be up soon-ish. Sorry again for any inconveniences.

MilosVerse

Hi! Your story is pretty great so far.  Very interesting plot with enough suspense to make me wonder what could happen next. While the dialogue is sometimes pretty straight forward or "corny" (not really but its the word that kind of fits lol) its still very entertaining.
          
          Only problem is that its a new story so I gotta be patient to see upcoming chapters LMAO can't wait for the rest!!

MilosVerse

@NoName1111111q  no problem at all but don't say that. Your dialogue doesn't suck, corny at times yes but in a pleasurable way. Idk a way that makes you smile while also finding it enjoyably silly. More like a improvement waiting to happen than a actual flaw lol.
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NoName1111111q

@MilosVerse yea I know I suck at dialogues, trying to improve a little bit in that aspect. A new chapter was meant to be posted this Friday, but I had some stuff to sort out before. Still thanks a lot for the support, means a lot to me :D
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zxcvbn23rewq

Dude, you're effing awesome ;)

zxcvbn23rewq

@NoName1111111q really appreciate you saying that ;)
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NoName1111111q

@zxcvbn23rewq  i couldve swore it was only in library but eh. Also peak chapters till now.
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zxcvbn23rewq

@NoName1111111q typical W behavior ;)
            I think you need to have the book in your reading list tho
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TylerThompson752

Hi sorry for bothering you but I’m currently on a vacation in Alaska and it’s really for the next few days I’ll be in the woods so I won’t have any wifi so I decided to send this message now I just wanted to ask you if you have the time can you please update your story soon please like maybe tonight tomorrow or in a few days please thanks

NoName1111111q

Im currently on vacantion too! I'll try to update in The next few days. And if I'm honest, I started this book because I just felt like it. It really does mean a lot to see that people are actually reading it :).
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TylerThompson752

Hi if you have time tonight or this weekend can you please try and update your lion guard story thanks

NoName1111111q

Ok I'll try, I already have like 70% of it done. Next month I have a very important exam cuz I'm in 8th grade, and I don't have a lot of free time but in June i'll really start writing.
            Also thx for reminding me. I almost forgot about it. :)
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