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Hello hope you are doing great if you have time please check out my story and let me know what you think here is the link https://my.w.tt/tMMedBT3jbb
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@dev1lque9 Hi there! Your story seems very good from the few chapters I've read so far. Introducing Jeremy's death from an early stage was a very good touch seeing as he appears later on to warn her. The little flashbacks were also a nice touch as they gave the reader more insight to the previous occurrences before the book. You could add a little more description though to help the reader to visualise the scene. Other than that, I really enjoyed the first chapters I read. Keep up the good work!
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