kt_the_writer

Hello hope you are doing great if you have time please check out my story and let me know what you think here is the link https://my.w.tt/tMMedBT3jbb

No_G00DBYE

@dev1lque9 Hi there! Your story seems very good from the few chapters I've read so far. Introducing Jeremy's death from an early stage was a very good touch seeing as he appears later on to warn her. The little flashbacks were also a nice touch as they gave the reader more insight to the previous occurrences before the book. You could add a little more description though to help the reader to visualise the scene. Other than that, I really enjoyed the first chapters I read. Keep up the good work!
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Jenesaispas780

@MalfoyNoirs_bae1210,
          You should add some text to your .. uh.. I dunno what to call it... your profile info? 
          To add interest to your profile and perhaps draw attention to it? 
          I tried, but so far no followers .
          You would be more likely, 'cause u are a better writer.
          - Lol.s

No_G00DBYE

@Jenesaispas780
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Jenesaispas780

! I love it!
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No_G00DBYE

@Jenesaispas780 I did it
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