Noa Zak

You’re welcome!! I really LOVE your story!!! And I didn’t even give the full info in my comment— we saw how hard it was for Lizzie to be around Margaret in the show when Margaret only killed her BROTHER. Imagine how unbearable it’ll be for Isabella if it’s her own SON whom Margaret kills (in a world where Isabella convinced Edward IV to spare her son somehow, maybe by marrying him to Edward’s daughter, though it’s unlikely bc Lancasterians will rise up for him regardless). The Tudors will never know peace then, and it sounds like you want Henry and Isabella to be a love match from the start, so that’s bad. Also, since very likely the York brothers will kill the boy, it’ll OBLITERATE Isabella’s beautiful relationships with her brothers= devastating. Moreover, Edward IV’s kids were all declared bastards, Richard died childless and there was attainder on the Clarence line, so we saw at the White Princess that Richard III named John De La Poole as his heir— the eldest son of his SISTER Elizabeth. Elizabeth wasn’t even the eldest York sister, but Richard CHOSE her son. Bc of the aforementioned circumstances with her brothers, Isabella and her son will be in a similar situation, and with Isabella’s son having the strongest Lancaster claim on top of his already existing York claim? That boy WILL have the stronger claim and become king, even if Henry marries Isabella, so Margaret will have to kill him before that. A girl is a cleaner solution— she can be betrothed to Edward V for York (first cousins marriage allowed), she won’t acc marry him before 1483 when she’ll be 12 and he disappears by then. She’ll be 14 when Henry wins at Bosworth, and 15 in 1486 when Arthur is born— perfect age to be married off to a foreign prince (daughter of a prince and a queen and sister to the future king) to secure an alliance that the new Tudor dynasty needs, and it’ll be after a Tudor heir was born so nobody would marry her for the throne. @YuriOtosaka

@sourmuse OMG!!! This idea is absolutely INCREDIBLE!!! Now I’m just dying to read this!!! And you’re defo NOT yapping AT ALL, bc I honestly LOVE discussing these things with you Cara just as much!!! 

@NoaZak8 I'll be honest, if I ever write an alternate fatal flaw series short story, I'll make loads of plot changes -- a prime idea is that scarlet's death will be delayed and she'll be mother to 2 kids, "carina" (?) bridget-black who will be raised all crude, sharp & snobby by walburga, and another daughter scars will have with evan rosier a year before, let's call her frances. frances/carina will have this to-die-for complex half-siblings dynamic; frances is a brat who wants everything carina has including harry, and is essentially bitter bcs she wasn't raised by bridget/black/rosier but rather a less famous pureblood fam. overall a frances/harry/carina love triangle cause harry just loves bridgets and even tho frances is this perfect girl for him, he still wants carina though she's destined to kill him (circling to FIF plot) by prophecy. sorry for yapping, I just love talking ab all this with u!!

@NoaZak8 of course. I understand... there's been some angsty regulus POV & black family references in recent BOLTER chaps and a scarlet feature too if ur interested <33

Hello my friend!!! Thank you!!! You are SOOOO SWEET for writing this!!! To tell you the truth, I’ve had a hectic and extremely busy time at uni, with the end of the semester and exams at all of that so I hadn’t had the chance to comment in a while (bc as you know my friend, when I comment on a chapter I do it fully and properly hahahah), but now that it’s over I’m DEFO meaning to get right back into your story and binge read EVERYTHING that I missed and COMMENT on ALL of it!!! You KNOW how much I absolutely ADORE your story!!! @EvannaClarke

@NoaZak8 Yes! There isn't a lot, but there are a couple of chapters coming up that will be centered around Sirius, Helena and Remus :) there's 2 that are coming in GoF :) 
            
            There isn't a lot of them, most of the time when we things from Sirius/Remus' perspective is in the chapters with everyone... there's only a few from Sirius' perspective, and they're usually pretty big and important chapters :)

Hiiii!! Yes, I am, thank you!!! And thank you SO MUCH for writing to me!!! I’ve been meaning to ask you— Ik that the story’s main focus is Grace, and the lead pairing is Grace and Harry, but you DID say that there will be Sirius and Helena too. So my question is— are we gonna get any chapters from Sirius’/ Remus’ pov, detailing what’s going on with the adults back home and especially with Sirius and Helena?? @evannaclarke