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          The story has a strong plot. It’s not entirely new, but it feels very refreshing. I’m really curious to see how the author will handle their misunderstandings. The character descriptions and development are excellent — truly the highlight of the story. Yibo’s point of view is written deeply and beautifully. No plot holes, no unnecessary dragging; everything flows perfectly. I’m waiting for Season 2 and hope the author starts it soon.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/356231556

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          This story is for readers who love fluffy and cute plots. The storyline is very simple — not a heavy or major plot-driven story — but the writing is beautiful. The character development is good, there are no plot holes, and overall it’s a nice, light read.
          Read it and tell me your opinion.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/348561584

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          No doubt this author is truly amazing. I’ve read one of her stories, “How You Die,” and I have to say it was a masterpiece with so many twists and turns.
          
          About this story — I read it a long time ago and had forgotten about it. When I started reading again, I realized I had already read it before. I also noticed many similarities with another ongoing book. The other writer just made a few changes, but the plot was almost the same, and even some events were identical.
          
          I don’t want to mention her name, but I know her very well. I really wish I didn’t know that she is writing a story so similar to this one. I hope I’m wrong.
          
          The plot of this story is mind-blowing — no plot holes, no unnecessary drama, and no unnecessary dragging. Read it and tell me what you think.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/198448641

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          To be very honest, all the Yizhan stories I’ve read so far were really enjoyable. Some were so amazing that I can’t even explain. Most of the Yizhan fandom is very mature, and their writing shows that maturity.
          
          Now coming to this story — the plot isn’t exactly new, but the writing is really good. The character development is impressive, especially Zhan’s character. You can say Zhan was a power bottom, only soft for Yibo, otherwise totally sassy, fierce, and super moody. Sometimes even Yibo couldn’t handle him.
          
          Then Yibo’s mother — her character was also written very well. Even though she didn’t really do anything significant for Yibo, the one good thing she did was Zhan. That part was very nicely shown.
          
          I also loved how every time Zhan was kidnapped, he saved himself. Even in the last kidnapping, he freed himself on his own — Yibo came very late.
          
          And the scene at the grandparents’ house? Mind-blowing. The way the writer described it, no ordinary person could handle all that. Salute to Zhan!
          
          There are no plot holes, no dragging, no unnecessary cringe. And Zhan’s funny scenes were all so good.
          
          Read it and share your opinions too!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/254236344

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          If you want to read a masterpiece, then this story is for you. And if you’re into crazy stuff, bring it on, guys—this story is wild! Don’t judge it by the description alone; there’s so much more than you could ever imagine. Each character is written so skillfully, with top–tier character development and plot.
          
          One thing I love the most is how the writer gives consistent updates. She starts one story, completes it, and only then starts the next—no months of gaps. Her persistence made me an even bigger fan. I can never forget the names Lavender and Gin hahaha. No plot holes, no dragging, no unnecessary drama—just a full-course meal you’re going to enjoy .
          
          I love Jimin’s sinful mouth, and I loved Jungkook’s wild behavior—but of course, he’s not psycho. I adored Kangmin’s character so much; he’s truly lovely. I hated Ricky and the president the most. The cutest couple is Woo and San. And the most deserving ending for negative characters was what x3 got.
          
          I loved Jikook’s first kiss—it felt like watching a movie. I really liked Jessi’s character, and Joonie’s madness was so fun. But writer… why did you kill my favorite Minsung? 
          
          The ending was amazing.
          Read it and tell me in the comments what you liked the most…
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/400587059

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          On Wattpad, Omegaverse is my favorite genre, and whenever the plot is good, the story instantly becomes one of my favorites. In this particular story, the plot isn’t very unique — it follows the familiar setup of two rivals, where one wants peace and the other, Jungkook, holds the upper hand.
          
          But what really caught my attention was Jimin’s character in the early chapters. I loved his fierceness, his strength, and the way he stood up to anyone who tried to control him. It truly touched my heart. The moment when Jungkook tested Jimin to see how much he cared for him was very sweet, and the scene where Jungkook declared that Jimin belonged to him was also written beautifully.
          
          There aren’t any major plot holes, but I do feel the story lacked clear explanations in some parts. For example, the alpha who hurt Jimin — what exactly was his reason? The writer should have explained that. The same goes for why Jimin’s own family was against him; adding more clarity would have made the plot even stronger. And another confusing point was why they wanted Jimin’s child when they weren’t willing to accept him in the first place. These moments needed a bit more detail.
          
          Overall, though, the story was well-written. The character development was good, Jikook’s chemistry was strong, and several dialogues were very well done, making the reading experience enjoyable. Now you all should read it and tell me what you think.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/399187435

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          Okay, this story is very different, and the plot is unique too. The beginning is really strong, but after Zhan comes back after 7 years, the story starts becoming a little boring, so I skipped a few chapters. I’m also never a fan of toxicity — even though Yibo becomes a total sweetheart later, it’s still too toxic for me. And I’m not a fan of R_p_, and what Yibo did is not acceptable, even if in reality many people end up accepting it.
          
          But there are also many characters in this story that I found very interesting, like Jason, Fourth, and Mark. Their character development is very important and gives real depth to the plot. And the twins — especially the girl — made the storyline stronger. There are no plot holes, and the writing is good.
          
          Enjoy the story, guys.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/397681108

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          Some stories you just start randomly and don’t expect anything special from them. I began this one with the same mindset — thinking it wasn’t a big plot or anything extraordinary, just a simple story. But it was written so incredibly well. I really want to praise the writer for bringing the words to life.
          I never skip entire texts, but sometimes I skip parts when I feel it’s getting boring. But with this story, I read almost everything and enjoyed it all.
          
          Literally, who gets married like this? But they did in the story, and Yibo… oh my God. Please, someone find a man like him. I would never let him slip from my hands. People like Yibo in this story are real gems. And Zhang — oh boy — where can we find such an understanding person? I haven’t found one yet; people like them only exist in stories.
          
          It’s a masterpiece with skillful writing, good character building, and great character descriptions. The plot is ordinary, but the strong writing makes it exceptional. Read it and then tell me how you find the story.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/345478530

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