Noctilluca

I'm doing an overhaul on Goodnight Moon. So far just the first 4 chapters, but I'm working my way up to a few new chapters that I know are way overdue. I highly recommend going back and reading the new versions of earlier chapters as I've really progressed as a writer. Thank you all so much for the patience and support!

anonymous_user883

Your book, Goodnight Moon, refers to a town to the west of Seattle.. But Seattle's entire west coast is just that, a coast, with ocean beyond it.. I'm seeing just a small gap in your logic, unless that was intentional, in which case, well played at making an imaginary town for your book.

Noctilluca

@anonymous_user883 Don't worry I know the geography. I just didn't feel like using a real town or city. That always makes me feel weird. Like I have to get every detail about said town correct. 
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Noctilluca

I'm doing an overhaul on Goodnight Moon. So far just the first 4 chapters, but I'm working my way up to a few new chapters that I know are way overdue. I highly recommend going back and reading the new versions of earlier chapters as I've really progressed as a writer. Thank you all so much for the patience and support!