@NocturnalLights ahhh you've written the words I've always wanted to read. I really tried to write the emotion through only dialogue so I'm really glad that it got through to people. Aside from the occasional tears and cries of pain, I truly hope you enjoyed reading this and I'm currently working on the ending right now and well, all I have to say is prepare yourself, it may not be the ending that you wanted but I've tried to make it as real as possible. ahh, the word play, I'm glad someone got it. I guess you have to really understand the story to understand the word play. oh, it's quite nice to see you doing a similar style of writing; when I get time, I'll be sure to check it out and I'm sure your writing is beautiful in its own way too (: