WRITINGFREAK2541

I read your book and really enjoyed it’s theme atmosphere and set of characters that made it great. I hate asking this but I do have a question. I’ve been working on a book called Deku the monster unleashed. The first 7 chapters seemed to go pretty well but I noticed the downward spiral of people reading the book. If it’s not too much is there anything i might’ve down wrong and anything I need to improve?