Maddymad

This story carries a powerful mix of tragedy, politics, and human vulnerability. You handle the shift from tense alliances to personal heartbreak really well. The queen’s quiet suffering, Mena’s sudden death, and the political pressure that forces a child into diplomacy all hit hard. The pacing feels natural, and the emotional weight grows with every scene. It’s a gripping tale of power, loss, and survival in a world where even love becomes a negotiation. Beautifully written and emotionally rich.

Maddymad

@NomysTee ofcs I like it alot, looking forward for more ,  Well  do you post visuals/refs for you characters somewhere? I'd love to see how you imagine them.
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NomysTee

@Maddymad Thanks for liking my story. I will update more and I do hope you enjoy my storytelling.
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