@NarHollow reading your story was so incredibly interesting, definitely a new turn on what I originally read, it's going so well like it's mind blowing how amazing it is. Though while ready the story your quotation marks aren't fully in the right space, but if that's how you write them then that's fine, usually people write them like; "how are you?" Tid asked. But you usually write it like; "hey, over there ." Tid said or you forget to finish the quotation marks so it looks like this "hey there! Tid said.. and a few different ways but I ain't finna lecture you like that because you're doing a great job nonetheless, and I hope to see more of your story!