NonieStar
@ Eupheliphia it's really just the universal writer experience to dislike your old stories. My writing style evolved, I got a lot better at writing, and I re-read that story, and I just cringe. It is not good. I'm sure in a couple years I'll also cringe at what I'm writing right now, that's just the way it goes. You could always write your own story about Chiara. That way its exactly how you like it.