@Noorahjr98 I’m sorry—I just saw this! I love it when people tell me what they really think, so thank you. This story is in its rawest, roughest form and will need to undergo revision to fix that. Reader feedback truly does help! I wish everyone was as honest when asked what they really think, and I very much appreciate it! If you continue reading and ever have a critique, please don’t be afraid to share it! :)