Nope_NotMe
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Alright. I developed a new pet peeve while reading the Caraval series. Don’t get me wrong, I’ve enjoyed the series overall.
However.
I can’t stand how many times the author says :
-She smelled like mystery and magic.
-He smelled like dark secrets and cob webs.
-His scent was that of broken hearts and crushed dreams.
-The air tasted like shadows and anticipation
-the drink tasted of forbidden promises and deception.
Like what does that even mean??
I have no clue what a crushed dream smells like and that doesn’t help me understand in any way shape or form. I think the author was trying to evoke a sense of magic, but overdid it way too much.
As a result all her characters smell like abstract concepts.
So yeah. That’s my rant. Anyway, she is a great author and good job to her for making this interesting series. That’s just my new little pet peeve.
wuigeni_101
@Nope_NotMe felt the same when I was reading it...her characters seem more like caricatures than people with actual thoughts.
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Nope_NotMe
Alright. I developed a new pet peeve while reading the Caraval series. Don’t get me wrong, I’ve enjoyed the series overall.
However.
I can’t stand how many times the author says :
-She smelled like mystery and magic.
-He smelled like dark secrets and cob webs.
-His scent was that of broken hearts and crushed dreams.
-The air tasted like shadows and anticipation
-the drink tasted of forbidden promises and deception.
Like what does that even mean??
I have no clue what a crushed dream smells like and that doesn’t help me understand in any way shape or form. I think the author was trying to evoke a sense of magic, but overdid it way too much.
As a result all her characters smell like abstract concepts.
So yeah. That’s my rant. Anyway, she is a great author and good job to her for making this interesting series. That’s just my new little pet peeve.
wuigeni_101
@Nope_NotMe felt the same when I was reading it...her characters seem more like caricatures than people with actual thoughts.
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Nope_NotMe
Lately I’ve been very into “The Backrooms” and all the levels and entities within those levels. Such a fun concept and very inspiring when it comes to writing. I’m really excited for the new video game Subliminal to come out, it looks like the perfect Backrooms game. Already thinking of ways I can put backroom themes on future writing
Nope_NotMe
@_schnidde_ it is an original story , currently sitting at 37k words, with goal of 85k. I wouldn’t do a full on Backrooms book, but I like to add elements of being in an abandoned place where things used to exist.
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_schnidde_
Uuu what will the story be like? Like apart of the backrooms thing. Is it a fanfig or sum else?
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DinatuRimamsomte
Hi I just started reading my boss is felix, it's so good.really good ✨
ChlorineBourgeois
Hihihi @Nope_NotMe!! By the time I wrote this, I have at least reread your take on a Felinette fanfic, 4 times. As well as the Not you au. My Boss is Felix is a work of art, I refuse to believe that something can be this well written. When I first got the chance to read it, my heart was rooted out for this ship. I absolutely thank you really so much for creating such a unique miraculous au. The plot spectacular, even the twists added into it. Everything fit in placed perfectly. The way you described Marinette and Felix, I have no words for it due to how of an amazing standard you set. It was descriptive, as well not to mention how gradual and progressive their perception of each other was. I know it was a slow burn, a very slow one, and this trope became my favorite because of the masterpiece you made. After reading your two miraculous fanfics, I was sure I had a favorite writer. I hope for more people to see this wonderful inspiring creation and lastly, it would be really astonishing to see your take again on another miraculous fanfic !! -
ProblemChild1720
@ChlorineBourgeois OML THIS IS8 WHAT I WAS SAYING WHEN I READ IT. Genuinely no fanfic has ever made me felt the way that one has it was that amazingly written.
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Nope_NotMe
Thank you so much!! ☺️☺️ I appreciate your kind words and am happy that you found the story meaningful! Writing this story and how it connects to the readers means a lot to me! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!
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JazzyNightmare
Hello, long time no see!
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NuliSimo
I love Felix is My Boss it is one of the best wattpads I have ever read, it literally brought me to tears..!!!!!
Nope_NotMe
Awww thanks so much!! This made my day! I’m glad to hear you enjoyed it! It brought me to tears as well :)
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ProblemChild1720
Your miraculousbooks are out of this world!! I only started writing Felinette after reading yours!!!
Nope_NotMe
Thanks so much!! I’m so glad to hear you found it inspiring to write Felinette! It is truly a fun dynamic to write!
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_schnidde_
I have a question. Would you be interested in writing a new book (after the one you just released)? Like the new book wouldn't be a fanfiction but a story with your made up characters and plot? That would be really nice! If not, it is also okay of course! I just think you have the talent, you know xD
_schnidde_
Yeah, I know what you mean. I am also writing a story with my own plot and characters and it's a bit harder but it is so much fun because the ressources are kind of unlimited. I am looking forward to it!! Definitely gonna read it!!
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Nope_NotMe
Hi! Yea I’ve been developing a plot and would like to create an original story! Creating an original story is so much harder than fanfic I’m realizing but it’s still fun. Thanks so much!
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Nope_NotMe
Merry Christmas to all and all a good night!