Okan-sama123

I love your “ blood red mirror” story.
          I don’t wanna insult you but,is this Superman and supergirl based?
          And there so many scenarios in my head, like the reaction of Homelander when he find out the truth, or the reaction of soldier boy,but that’s too much.
          And keep up the good work

NoraTheEndless

Thank you Okan-Sama. My OC is based on Supergirl in a way but it’s very loosely related to Superman and Supergirl comics. Don’t worry you’re not insulting me and thank you for the kind words!
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NarHollow

Hello there friend, I reckon you are a book enthusiast yourself , enough to make you a good judge of a book, I need that, an opinion on my newly published story if it is possible, I would appreciate a lot.

NoraTheEndless

Hiya @NarHollow, 
            Great dialogue, plot, and direction! I would suggest fixing a few grammatical errors and varying the structure a bit more. What I mean is that many of the chapters consist of paragraph after paragraph, making it difficult to keep track of where you are in the story and slowing down the pacing. I also struggle with this, so it's just a matter of working on it.
            That being said, it's great and has a lot of potential, and I've thoroughly enjoyed it so far!
            Keep up the good work!
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