NotKrill

I am back. Back again

this is a post with some words

hoi. remember me from pony.town?

Eyo, I made another story. Drawing took me 3 days and idk why.
          K bye 

Uhhh, hi
          I made this account like a year ago and this is my first time posting a story. It's kinda rushed cos it's a school assignment (it doesn't require posting it but I wanted to so, eh)
          
          Pls give some constructive criticism on "As beautiful as a doll".
          Fun fact: Inspired by the original The little mermaid
          
          - I ask why