Is it alright if I change my "One less Kirov" style?
From going with
Char1:"Testing."
Char2:"Copy."
to :
The breeze up here was as cold as an ice could be as snowflakes storms everywhere within the radius of the clift. "We gotta jump down! There's no other way!" Char1 said as he tried to pull Char2 to agree with him. "What about our families?!". Char2 resist, bringing up both their family to oppose Char1 ideas.
In this way , I think it's far more easier since There's really no need to spam " , : , . and more unnecessary stuff however if you guys liked the 1st writing style then I'll keep the One Less Kirov style the same. If otherwise then you know what it means.