The fanfic True eldest Todoroki is actually a very nice idea, but the characters all talk and think as if they had studied physiology for four years. It would be nicer if Jouno were one of the only ones who spoke like that, and the rest acted more like the original characters. That would add a bit of variety.
And please don't take this the wrong way, I like this fanfic but the characters seem a little monotonous (and yes, I know that it can sometimes be really complicated to write in a way that makes it varied).
Just see it as a little bit of feedback.
